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by AMOM from Out side of St. Loui

Last Post 14 hours Ago


Heart of USA

The beating heart of the USA

is the bustle, noise, smoke and chatter

of the American Work-Place .

Morning traffic filled with bright eyed

people  on their way to work

They  laugh, tell jokes, gripe, fight

but build, produce, generate,

 

Fills their soul with satisfaction

pays income taxes, state taxes,

Social security taxes,

buys houses, cars clothing, food,

vacations, schools, runs  churches

Produces, Produces, Produces, and creates happiness.

 

Then along came the smudges

Making deals with other countries

ripped the heart out of American  (for money)

  Guess who passed Nafta??????,,,Who ripped the heart out of america??????????????

The smudges think, "I can run the USA "  

The heart is beating slower and slower

as sadness  replaces joy

Heads down, as the blood is slowly seeping out of America

The smudges are fading out the color of the American Canvas

replacing it with shades of gray.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Exerciser999 read my blog
Nov 21, 2008 | 9:34 PM

Hey now are you tryin' ta write a poem. If so maybe I can help.

Mutatis-Mutandis read my blog
Nov 23, 2008 | 12:24 AM

I like it AMOM, very creative. FreedomFree should take notes.

Speedy62269 read my blog
Nov 24, 2008 | 10:59 PM

I thought for sure that Exerciser was going to rap out a rhyme for us? Come on girl (or guy) lets see what you have now? I just read one of your other raps and it was funny!

kdubken read my blog view my photos
Nov 27, 2008 | 4:20 AM

What??????

Biker2Max read my blog
Nov 27, 2008 | 10:49 AM

Hey kdubken Exerciser is a poet too but he/she does the rap version. I just found his/her rhyme on a Happy Thanksgiving blog somewhere. Its pretty funny so you need to check it out somewhere.

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